The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

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The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

In the recent years, people tend to have their own car in order to serve the individual purpose. It helps their life and work becoming flexible and convenient; and also provides a various option for services and leisure. However, a wide range of problems has been identified and need to be addressed.

The widespread use of cars has serious effects on the environment which means vehicles are the major causing air pollution and gas emissions. Car exhaust contributes to acid rain and carbon dioxide, which enhance global warming and damage human health. Moreover, exploiting numerous cars leads to traffic jam since instead of walking, cycling or taking a public transport, more and more people drive to school or workplace. As a consequence, traffic jam becomes heavy and hard to control at rush hours.

To solve these matters, some people suggest that the government should promulgate strict rules on the number of cars in a house and the use of cars. On the other hand, it would reduce the mobility of car users and the car manufacture industry. The better solution would use the car that utilizes environmentally friendly fuel so as to minimize the harmful emission into the atmosphere so that it does not only protect human health but also prolong human life.

In conclusion, no one can deny that there have been many problems causing from the unlimited use of cars, especially related to the environment. However, the promotion of car design in the near future will contribute to enhancing of present dilemma.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... utilizes environmentally friendly fuel so as to minimize the harmful emission into the ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65585543792 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8025629165 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294080096901 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093590849043 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639082542237 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159435983654 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490045960576 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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