The use of social media is replaced face-to face interaction among people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people tend to communicate each other through various social media apps such as facebook, Zalo, or Twitter instead of direct conversation. In my perspective, the positive effects of these technologies to our life have been overshadowed by its drawbacks.
In term of the advantages, social network helps us keep in contract with our loved ones easier, regardless of geographic locations. For instance, overseas students can keep in touch with their family or friends on their daily basic by using call video in diferent social media platforms like Zooms, Msteams, and so on. Social media is also an excellent tool in marketing and business. In this digital era, companies can post and update their products’ detail information or some advertising campain to their guest on Facebook, Instagram, etc, so that they will save a great deal of money and time more than other traditional advertisements on newspapers or magazines.
Though all these positive aspects above, personally I believe that when we mention about communication, social media still have more bad effects than the good ones. More and more people have been addticted to these platforms then they can be stick with the screen all the time and ignore all the things surrouding them. Regularily using social media affects the way they write or speak especially among young generation. Thesedays, many adolescenes have a habit of using their slang which is often use in message mostly in their assignment or some formal emails.
In a nut shells, due to all these reasons mentioned, I suppose that negative effects of social media in communication outweigh the advantages.
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- All children should be made to wear school uniform To what extent do you agree approve of or disagree 78
- The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009 The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually Other people believe that sometimes class works should be done in small groups 73
- The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Describe a time you were sleepy but had to stay awake You should say When it was Why you had to stay awake How you kept yourself awake And explain how you felt about it 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, for instance, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21132075472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82346370832 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0479278071 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142685477948 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611144264313 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446649645948 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894705708263 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196120957929 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.