Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrue that video records are a better method to learn about the way other individuals in the world live rather than written documenents. From my point of views i mostly agree with this notion because of its convenience for the artist and audience. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, video record is more attractive and interseted for the research, audience and citizens. The value information and academic knowledge can be trasmitted by the artist through interesting image. To illustrate, there was a statistic by famous scientist Thomson, ranking the advantage of Video records and written documents of the individuals in New York city. Nearly everyone were decide video record for improving there knowledge, ability and mentality. Furthermore, it will provide enough academic knowledge for the individuals to understand about the way other people in the world live. Not only does it can talk more aspect about the human activity life, but also the benefit lesson of artist can be easier to transmitted for the audience.
However, we can not negate the significence of written documenents for the development of people life. Not only does it can reduce the revenu for producting documenents projects, but also written documenents and hard cover will provide deeth knowledge and information for the citiznes. For instance, various professional tutor advided their teenagers written documenents to improve their knowledge before the final examination.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay that i totally agree with this statement, but written documenents also brings a plenty of advantage for the people life. The youngs generation need to have bright plan to improve themselves for the development of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83846528762 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4432965126 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232936216316 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899184603708 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134904730064 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15204023975 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108581583634 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.