The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

Essay topics:

The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

The given histograms depict the information about the count of marriage and divorce statistic by 8 distinct nations in the year 1981 and 1994. It is calibrated in numbers.

Overall,the marriage statistic was maximum as compared to divorce statistic in the given year.

It is crystal clear that, in 1981 the divorce statistic of USA was near about 5 thousand, and it decreased to 4,500 people. Just under 3 thousand residents had been divorced in UK in 1981 and after 13 year it decreased by 500 people. The count of individuals who got divorce in Finland and Germany that were 2 thousand in during the year 1981. In Italy near about 500 people had took divorce in the year 1981 and 1994. It was observed that the number of Denmark citizens was same in divorce case during the year 1981 and 1994.

As far as trend was concerned, in the year 1981 the marriage statistic of USA (10 thousand) and it was double than Denmark (5,000 people). In1981 the count of people who got marriage did not cross the 6 thousand in Finland, Germany, Fernce and Italy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63101604278 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44502598709 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9530289309 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24256775418 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117753042232 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668152314291 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179222868558 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426955273777 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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