Wearing uniforms is popular in schools, but some people argue that this might cause damage to children's individuality. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, uniforms have become the most popular school attire in many educational institutions. However, some argue that it may hinder the child's expression. While uniforms could undoubtedly lead to discrimination of individuality, I believe that this clothing promotes equality regardless of the differences between the pupils.
In my opinion, school clothing can promote a better sense of unity and promote discipline within the premises. Additionally, wearing the same style of suit would encourage the children to belong to the same group or have a single identity. A uniform can be an indicator of what school they belong to, giving a sense of belonging and pride. For example, students would be more pressured and focused on their studies rather than their reputation or image, which is especially beneficial. As a result, everyone dressed the same would boost morale as well as school spirit. Ensuring togetherness and equality is the ultimate goal!
In my point of perspective, these outfits could, however, encourage conformity which can restrict a child's development. Furthermore, wearing a uniform would suppress their passion and freedom to express themselves. They may feel discouraged and oppressed to develop their personality and sense of style. For example, the children would develop their own opinions that they are forced to do something and would rationalize the society in the same way. As a result, this may promote resentment towards the school. Developing rules should be considered to be based on both parties.
In conclusion, school uniforms have been a tradition for the past few years, bringing mixed feelings over time. Improvement towards educational systems and learning should be addressed along with the moods and viewpoints based on the students bringing a neutral statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4768683274 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9449468323 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3182575122 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1743839913 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569843627171 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435466423603 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105351562548 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465835053942 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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