As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
People have differing opinions about whether enterprises should have social obligations. Personally, while I accept that making a profit is no doubt their top priority, I think that they should contribute to the society as well.
On the one hand, businesses already have relevant reasons to focus on earning money. Firstly, in order to survive in the competitive world, they have to pay their running costs such as employee’s wages, payments for tax and buildings. Secondly, if a company wishes to develop and prosper, it might need to invest in innovations and inventions, which can only be done if it has a large budget. Finally, a corporation could barely think of making a contribution to society and other responsibilities if it doesn’t even have enough money to operate.
On the other hand, besides the financial aims, businesses should definitely do more for the community. In their process of developing, many environmental problems could be caused by their activities; therefore, it is important for them to take precise measurements to protect the environment. besides, they should also enhance the quality of their employees, who have been dedicating their time and effort to the company, by for example, paying “living wage” or giving them presents in special events. Furthermore, only when the society is in good health could businesses maintain and develop, thus they should definitely take actions to support their local community. For example, they could contribute a part of their income to the charities or education initiatives.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should consider making social contribution in addition to maximizing profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...easurements to protect the environment. besides, they should also enhance the quality o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44486692015 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09610318546 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2329156289 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168685110255 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675594131777 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534523787604 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112363734319 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353674483704 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.