As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Besides making a profit, businesses should also be responsible for society. I completely agree with the idea that companies should have more social obligations than simply making money.
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make a profit to survive in a competitive world. The priorities of any company are revenue and profit that they make. By doing that, they can cover their running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. In addition, on top of these costs, businesses also need money for re-investment, research and development, and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company could not meet the changing demands of customers and re-investment, there is nothing that it would not do for society. In other words, only after earning a profit can the company contribute to the country.
On the other hand, businesses should not run with the sole aim of maximizing profit. Firstly, owners and managers need to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. Secondly, I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects, or education initiatives. Finally, instead of cheating on paying the tax by using accounting loopholes, company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I agree that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92795924881 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9479484006 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206377958813 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750302903883 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682174897056 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150837751036 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887867336827 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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