As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are different views about whether businesses should focus more on making a profit or social responsibilities. I completely agree with the idea that companies should do more for society than make money.
For a variety of reasons, it would be necessary to give more social obligations to businesses. Firstly, companies’ activities have considerable negative impacts on society, such as environmental pollution, exploiting labor, etc. Secondly, most companies concentrate more on earning money than being responsible for social issues. For example, many business owners are forcing employees to work longer hours for increasing outputs without caring about their well-being. Finally, there are social obligations which are included in the business ethics’ commitment. Therefore, it is essential for companies to do more for society besides money.
In addition, from my knowledge, all economies in the world are always seeking for sustainable development. In economic theories, a sustainably developed economy consists of growth both in quantity and quality. Maximizing profit is about meeting the demanding quantity while solving social problems is about achieving quality development. For example, in the past, many businesses focused more on exploiting natural resources. However, nowadays, they are putting effort into natural regeneration, enhancing the ecosystem, and protecting the environment. Or another clear example is that the economy now is full of emerging businesses that are doing a sustainable job to the environment. While meeting customer needs and generating profits, many companies also apply environmentally friendly processes and pay attention to working conditions.
In conclusion, I agree that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30418250951 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93606051679 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1218145153 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16113081922 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575621027639 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481937261513 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11487967487 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394410709367 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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