As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views about whether businesses should focus more on making a profit or social responsibilities. I completely agree with the idea that companies should do more for society than make money.
For a variety of reasons, it would be necessary to give more social obligations to businesses. Firstly, companies’ activities have considerable negative impacts on society, such as environmental pollution, exploited labor, v.v.
Secondly, most companies concentrate more on earning money than being responsible for social issues. For example, today, many business owners are forcing employees to work longer hours for increasing output without caring about their well-being.
Finally, social obligations are parts of the commitment to business ethics, which are necessary to do by companies for society besides money.
In addition, from my knowledge, at no time have all economies in the world sought sustainable development. In economic theory, a sustainable development economy consists of growth both in quantity and quality. Maximizing profit is about meeting the demanding quantity while solving social problems is about achieving quality development. For example, in the past, many American businesses focused more on exploiting natural resources. However, nowadays, Americans are putting effort into natural regeneration, enhancing the ecosystem, and protecting the environment. Or another clear example is that the economy now is full of emerging businesses that are doing sustainable business. While meeting customer needs and generating profit, companies also apply environmentally friendly processes and pay attention to working conditions.
In conclusion, I agree that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95785440613 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17495779685 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8508816389 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236424208466 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769653619098 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576786652595 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130718436894 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495360476793 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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