As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that, besides making money, enterprises also need to have public responsibilities remains a source of controversy. In my opinion, while generating profits is the top priority for each company, I agree that they should also conduct their business in a socially responsible manner.
On the one hand, the efforts of companies to maximize their profits may have some benefits for society as a whole. Firstly, the prosperity of entrepreneurs is a contribution to social development. This means that the higher the profits are earned by corporations, the more taxes they pay to the government. As a result, authorities may have more revenue to spend on key fields, including education and health care, which leads to an improvement in living standards of the whole community. Secondly, the growth of businesses is beneficial towards individuals' livelihood as well. In particular, by earning huge profits, companies are likely to expand their production. Consequently, more and more new job opportunities are created within the community.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why enterprises should accept that they have social responsibilities. The first reason is that their activities more or less have an impact on the environment. Without controls, the production processes may result in a serious environmental degradation, such as global warming stemming from factory emissions or the irresponsible sewage disposal. In order to compensate for the damage caused, companies, for example, can still install waste treatment systems instead of directly discharging chemical wastes into rivers. Another reason is that corporations also need to regenerate their human resources. In some cases, lots of giant entrepreneurs still have to get into trouble with their increasingly aged workforce, helping those who are less fortunate, therefore, is a potential solution for them. For instance, big companies such as Unilever and Vinamilk have enhanced their public image as well as enriched their skilled personnel through philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships and giving charitable donations.
In conclusion, although I recognize that making profits is the underlying principle of business, I would agree that all businesses should reflect upon their responsibilities towards society.
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- Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. 78
- The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65517241379 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20467108542 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9130556284 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2941176471 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200791279897 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605932626218 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577972215399 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132521082985 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636960365314 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.