As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
People have many different views about the problem. Besides making money, businesses are attributed to taking social responsibilities. I totally agree with this idea for these following reasons.
On the one hand, i believe that a large variety of businesses already donate to society by simply focusing on earning money. The first reason is that when companies earn a lot of profits, they can expand businesses scale which creates more job oppurtunities for people. In that way, they can build up abandant human resources for the development of their company. Additionally, when companies make higher profits, they will pay more taxes for the national authorities. This money can be used to invest in essential fields such as education or health care, which will peak society as a whole.
On the other hand, it is a vital that businesses be aware of their social responsibilities. Firstly, they must be conscious of environmental protection in which it is severely contaminated. For instance: The factories should improve the water drainage so that the waste does not emit the environment. Not only that, they can get the money they do for charity. For example: they can get funding for orphanage or the areas where the people are miserable.
In conclusion, although businesses do a lot of money, coughing must also be socially responsible
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
People have many different views about the problem. Besides making...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wing reasons. On the one hand, i believe that a large variety of busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21461187215 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97369323964 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4635593966 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217987087726 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847605923565 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102500780987 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17455262119 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921366375817 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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