When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people consider that the function of the building should be prioritized rather than its appearance. While these factors are put into comparison, I strongly believe that none of them is more significant, otherwise, a building must have the harmony of both purpose and its cover.
On the one hand, it is clear that the intention of a building is utterly essential. Buildings are constructed to satisfy people needs. For instance, a quantities of English education centres had been forming due to the demand of Vietnamese in learning language and going abroad. Naturally, the purpose decide the outer look. To be more precise, designers who manufacture a hospital are unable to bring the architecture of bar or playground to their draws.
On the other hand, the outward appearance plays an important role when designing a construction for some reason. First of all, many buildings are well-known according to its distinctive models. As an example, Landmark 81 were recognized as the highest skyscraper in Vietnam with the grand total height was 461 meters. Last but not least, some kind of architecture have become the culture of countries. To illustrates, people in Kontum are proud of ‘rong’ houses which are made from dried grass with massive roofs because this kind of architecture had become the unique of some ethnic groups in the Central of Vietnam.
To summarize, there is no way to separate or compare whether appearance or purpose has a greater impact to a construction. Otherwise, It would be much better if a building is not lack of any elements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...thnic groups in the Central of Vietnam. To summarize, there is no way to separat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10038610039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89970900933 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8876178221 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206162777175 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650057639877 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062766556818 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114314631077 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451572177226 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.