When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that usage intention is the most critical component to design a building rather than its outlook appearance. Personally, I strongly agree with this view.
It is understandable why some believe that the magnificence of a building is important when constructing a building. The principal reason for this is that building architecture can catch people's attention with its beauty. For example, the Big Ben clock is famous for its architectural design which made itself became one of the most tourist attraction places in England. However, I believe this to be a very short-sighted view. In fact, building a façade cannot always attract viewers. With the development of high-standard apartments nowadays, the appearance of apartment blocks will make its façade look monochrome as it follows only one typical architecture.
In addition, I am strongly convinced that the purpose of using is much more important to build a house. If designers have their own intention for their building, it will help the building not follow the same prototype. The greater the intention is, the more specific the building architecture will be. For example, the White mansion from America is one of the most famous places not only for its look but also for its protection purpose. Furthermore, usage intention can bring out the true value of the building. This will make the building become more attractive to other people.
In conclusion, while the beautiful outlook can attract other people, it is my belief that the intention of a building plays a crucial role in designing a building as it makes the building more attractive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16981132075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9625549671 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4580201489 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267417792256 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929875752937 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064832775043 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185726389268 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320483002914 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.