When new towns are planned it is important to build more public park or sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this some contemporary epoch, building healthy, functioning and productive cities is probably humanity's most pressing problem. It has become highly debatable whether more preference should be given to public parks or shopping complexes while planning new towns. Here, I will establish that public park or sports amenities should be prioritized over the shopping districts.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support my point of view. First and foremost, the role of constructing parks, gyms and stadiums to stimulate the folks towards physical exercise. To demonstrate, congested apartments and lack of open space act as stumbling block for City dewellers to participate in physical activities. Therefor, the establishment of parks and stadium can act as boon for City residents in order to perform outdoor activities such as jogging in the parks and play tennis, basketball and other sports at sports stadium. Needless to say, the idea of building parks and sports facilities deserves huge appreciation as it contribute remarkably to keep the city residents physically fit as fiddle.
Further emphasising on my point of view, parks play a phenomenal role to make the people socialize with their neighbours. To make it clear, civilians are expected to share their ideas, feelings and heart talks with neighbours when they visit the parks and stadiums. Hence, people can build harmonious bonding with their neighbours and build a caring neighborhood. Adding to it, the easy availability of shopping malls may act as fuel to upsurge the consumption rates and immense waste output. Consequently, the problem of trash are expected to accelerate on account of establishing shopping complexes which is detrimental for ambience. Therefore, more emphasis should be given to build parks or stadiums than shopping malls.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the existence of shopping district blessed the town dwellers with the numerous amenities. However, the exceptional benefits of parks and shopping malls can never be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51118210863 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01858946035 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5800136459 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248774959549 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761785415238 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515828759572 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14094501356 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455549520915 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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