Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?
In this contemporary epoch, people wants to maintain a balance between their personal and professional life. It is not a piece of cake for everyone to attain work-life balance. Therefore, majority of masses fail to achieve this aim. Here, I would like to throw light on some reliable solutions to achieve this balance.
The predominant solution to mitigate the work- life imbalance is that unlike spending leisure time in doing work to earn More and more, people should consume this time with their family members and pursue their interests. To make it clear, folks may temporarily forget their materialistic persuits when they are expected to share their heart talks with families and performing interesting activities. In this way, I believe that people can have a balance between their personal and professional life.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Government should introduce laws regarding to fixed working hours and better salary packages. To elucidate, people will do not require to work overtime to achieve more and more if handsome salary is given to them for fixed working hours. This enables people having some leisure time after work. Consequently, people can relish other aspects of life by consuming their free time. Recently the Government of Finland proposed a four days work in a week. It is claimed that it will enables people to spend more time with the families and pursue their interest. Hence, these measures could be implemented to maintain balance between personal and professional life.
To recapitulate, there are several reliable solutions to mitigate this imbalance. Therefore, people can maintain balance between their personal and professional life by executing these solutions into real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34181818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70457463697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6153107303 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397047285878 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135261411325 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954872760437 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277817484213 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207817087234 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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