While people in developing countries are happier than in the past, people in developed countries are less happy. Why? What can be learnt from this?
There are arguments that while people in developed countries are decrease the level of happiness compare in the past, people in developing countries are increase satisfaction. This essay will discuss about the reasons and the lesson that can be taken.
Developing nations as well as developing economic, as a result, local people will have good conditions of lives compare to the past which leads to increase their happiness extend. While people in developed countries are gain a lot of benefits such as education or health systems, they will face directly from another factors. In fact, the environmental problems likely to account a huge dissatisfaction of local people who living in developed nations. For example, the number of companies in America lead to this nation become one of the countries have the highest emission in the world, as a result, people in this country increase more illness.
Drawing from the phenomenon, we can point out a value from this. The material is the short ways leads to the happiness. In facts if lack of material, residents have to work harder to survive, and it is probably that they cannot enjoy their lives. Therefore, the government should raise their hands to support their people. For instance, in disease periods, government provide free services to transport foods to each home as well as, give a small money to help people who suffering by disease.
In conclusion, I believe economic growth is improving life in developing countries, while at the same time affecting developed countries. Therefore, a lesson to be draw from this issue is that the development of economy link directly to the happiness level.
- Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- In some countries more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why do you think it is happening How to solve this issue 11
- In many countries people like to eat a wider range of food than can be grown in their local place Therefore much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages 67
- PEOPLE SHOULD THINK THAT SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES HAVE A HUGE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON BOTH INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'small money'.
Suggestion: small money
...ort foods to each home as well as, give a small money to help people who suffering by disease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12132352941 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74777503181 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1765766401 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444641228865 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144906370892 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128087018978 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285610930878 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148974823055 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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