While people in developing countries are happier than in the past, people in developed countries are less happy. Why? What can be learnt from this?
There is a widely held belief that people in developed countries are becoming less happy than in the past while, conversely, people in developing countries are increasing their levels of satisfaction. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this trend and the lessons that can be learned from it.
It is true that economic development in developing nations has led to significant improvements in the lives of local people compared to the past. Greater economic growth has resulted in better conditions of living which has extended to an increase in happiness levels among these populations. On the other hand, developed countries have gained many benefits such as advanced education or healthcare systems but have faced multiple challenges as well. Environmental problems, for instance, have caused a high level of dissatisfaction among local residents in developed nations. The number of companies in America is a prime example of how excessive industrialization leads to higher emissions, resulting in increased health problems and lower happiness levels among citizens.
From the aforementioned phenomenon, it is evident that material wealth is not necessarily a short-cut to happiness. If there is a lack of material resources, people have to work harder to survive, leading them away from enjoying their lives. Therefore, governments should take steps to support their people. For instance, during disease outbreaks, governments should provide free services to transport food to each home and offer small amounts of money to help those suffering from illness.
In conclusion, I believe that economic growth improves the quality of life for people in developing countries; however, it also negatively impacts developed countries. Therefore, the lesson we can learn from this issue is that economic development is directly linked to the happiness levels of a country's population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55709342561 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03849576402 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2390327765 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393281776552 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125854144417 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134044166293 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263162355356 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172937577604 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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