The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest?
It is no doubt that with the advent of the internet, modern life has been facilitated significantly. However, with the widespread of it, many other problems are also evoked such as cybercrime and internet addiction. Those issues will be discussed in this essay as well as the solutions.
First of all, due to the anonymity and the lack of security of the internet that it has turned into a harmful environment for people who is not well-educated, especially kids. The number of cyberbullying and fraud cases, which are increasing currently, are partly because of this problem. Copyright issues, in addition, is another problem that is related to the internet. Furthermore, so convenient it is that many of us become too depended on the internet. In Japan, for example, there is a phenomenon where young citizens spent most of their life time online and not leaving their room. Thus, those who addicted to the internet became less socialize with their family or friends, which might lead to other mental issues.
Regarding the solutions, a great idea is that more stringent laws should be implemented in order to curb the criminal and protect the users. For instance, government should focus on banning websites that provide unlicensed music rather than individual user that download the music. On the helpful measures is to educate people about the potential risk of the internet with certain local free courses. In addition, if there are more exciting activities for children, it might draw their attention away from the internet. Thus, parent should held social bond games such as chess or football to connect with their children. Setting a limit on screen time is also a good idea to reduce the internet exposing time of young people.
In conclusion, the internet is certainly have certain detrimental effects on people lives, however if people are protected and supported by the authorities, combined with the joint effort of parents these drawbacks could be mitigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12654320988 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72321410501 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1988526497 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135468018992 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477770184219 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476744278727 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854509053284 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424080773161 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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