The widespread use of the Internet has thought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?
It is believed that although the popularity of the Internet provides us with various huge benefits, it also has a variety of negative aspects. This essay will discuss the main disadvantages of Internet Technology and some possible solutions to deal with these problems.
On the one hand, the widespread of the Internet causes a number of serious issues. First of all, the overuse of the Internet through electronic devices like smartphones and computers for recreation can harm our health. For examples, many people waste time to play games, watching movies and videos through the Internet in their leisure time, therefore they do not have time to exercise. Consequently, this can lead to obesity, which increases the likelihood of various diseases and medical conditions such as diabetes, cancers, and mental disorders. Secondly, the Internet distracts people from working and therefore hamper their ability to manage and balance time, energy, and attention. As a result, it can reduce the productivity of staffs and cause economic problems for their companies.
Finally, with access to billions of people in the world, it is possible for hackers to take over some individual's accounts and steal their personal information and their money. Furthermore, Internet Services companies like Google and Facebook already collect user's data to exploit for secret purposes.
On the other hand, there are a number of ways to solve these problems. Firstly, parents, teachers, and office managers should impose the restriction of cell phones and computers to restrain their access to the Internet. In addition, the government should enforce the Internet Services to develop Internet security as well as give the users more right to protect their private information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73324437133 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6928678069 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138701139875 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503422997129 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318414745464 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823328115518 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397990645124 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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