Without capital punishment (the dealth penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you do agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent days, ordinary citizens lean towards spending their well-intentioned enterprises to improve life quality and create a standard civilization. However, a small number of people engage in unlawful activities day by day. It is the driving force to state officials decide to impose capital punishment, which generates crimes in the community. A host of people are inclined to take into account the death penalty being notable. In my standpoint of view, I partly agree with this school of thought.
On the one hand, there is a testament for me to support my opinion. First and foremost, there are a bulk of different crimes in society. The judges consider the seriousness of every violence so that people who commit a crime will have suitable crime deterrents. For instance, in minor crimes such as shoplifting, pickpocketing, criminals have to entitle to rehabilitation programs as the act of the deterrent. Besides that, serious ones such as robbery or murder, lawbreakers have to receive the death penalty, or they are imposed stricter punishments like life imprisonment and prison sentences.
On the other hand, there is another compelling reason. It is undeniable that the death penalty is not always a suitable choice. To be more specific, there are situations that people were wrongly convicted and executed by receiving capital punishment. It spelled trouble for not only judges but also the defendant’s family.
In a nutshell, humans are in the dire need of a sense of safety and security, but we do not know that who can be potential criminals and who re-offend someday. I believe that without the death penalty, the governments can have other drastic measures to punish offenders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...reate a standard civilization. However, a small number of people engage in unlawful activities da...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...all number of people engage in unlawful activities day by day. It is the driving force to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17028985507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96690020887 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0295861335 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148053674066 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391252045206 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313618578324 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748893047989 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162956206711 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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