Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, it is argued that death punishment is to limit violence and crimes in community, so that society cannot live without it. However, it is partially disagreed because the humane way to take over this issue is to conduct rehabilitation.
To begin with, it is true that capital penalty offers a security for community to control crime cases due to a psychology effect. That is to say, when criminals have a chance to force people, they think twice because they will be punished to die, consequently it will bear in their mind to cancel desires to bread any kinds of crimes, being safe environment socially. For instance, China probably have regulated to execute Chinese men who rape women, and cases of this such sexual issue are perhaps decreasing year-to-year because of being afraid of this penalty as the psychological impact. Therefore, this nation is recorded as one of free sexual harassment country in Asia, prioritizing females’ security.
Nevertheless, instead of killing the criminals legally, it is believed that conducting the rehabilitation is more influential in order to decline violence and stop criminal attitudes. This is because the problem is not originated by anxiety, but the unstable-economy condition, and if imprisoning them is held more and more, they will act evil again after released. For example, Netherlands have imposed to rehabilitate the prisoners since 2009, as a result of its statistical research that they stole because of poverty in some districts. So that, it declined the number of criminal action in ten years later since the ex-prisoners were educated life skills to find jobs when in jails.
In conclusion, it is agreed that not only death penalty has an ability to control the incline of crime, but also rehabilitation, securing the social life. Where possible, both kinds of regulation should be balanced to receive maximum results to decrease rate of this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19292604502 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9500622043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8507632717 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5833333333 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198920670825 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722873218432 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832134235598 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128614761752 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07411384365 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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