Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Males and females are usually differentiate on the basis of their strengths and weaknesses. Due to this, it is thought that both men and women cannot participate in certain occupations because of their gender differences. While I disagree with this notion, as I believe today people of both sexes can enroll in any profession and can do their best .
To embark on, if male and female do the same type of work then it will uplift the business. The two different perspective help to create more innovative ideas which ultimately result in positive impact on any business. Moreover, any profession which is being run by only men or only women have numerous conflicts due to participation of same gender. Furthermore, individuals learn plenty of things like cooperation, equality, empathy and respect while working in same profession.
Besides this, it also broadens the perspective of society towards issues like gender inequality. In the past times women are only considered to do domestic work so, doing jobs with men suppress the orthodox thinking and change the perspective of society towards girls. For instance, first Indian woman who went space , kalpana chawla, is a proud moment for the country and she encouraged lots of parents to teach their daughters and build a better future for themselves. Also, there are certain professions like nursing which require people with more empathy ,patience and caring nature that mainly focus on women participation .
To conclude, both genders whether males and females can participate in any profession as they have right to choose any vocation . Moreover , it will help to learn various things from each other and also change perspective of world and maintain uniformity between genders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21863799283 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77770261531 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5399147106 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209619336658 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736612837083 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550237063243 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130981966424 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392959462874 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.