Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
As the nature of male and female there are many basic differences between them that which leads to a range of variety in their abilities. Subsequently, it can be affect their role in professional tasks. Although, some would argue that the gender should not consider in profession tasks. In my opinion, gender can be play an essential role for some of the professions and should be considered to select the appropriate candidate for a task.
Firstly, every occupation required special skills that may be more relevant to the character of men or women based on their natural instincts. For instance, the maternal feeling in the females will be an important reason to see more of women that work as pre-school and primary schools as teacher. Certainly, there are some male teachers for children but the women are outnumbered of men.
Secondly, many careers have some physical requirement that can be related to the body features and the effect of gender on it is undeniable. As an obvious example, a majority of security guards are men. Although, there are many women in the mentioned job too, but special difficulties such as night shifts and the harsh nature of job is compatible more with masculine traits.
Admittedly, many occupation have similar weight for both of genders and male and female according to the requirements and the assessment of people just have to do based on their abilities regardless of gender.
Taking everything into consideration, the gender has effect to select people for certain professions that need some physical features or special mood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ffect their role in professional tasks. Although, some would argue that the gender shoul...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ender can be play an essential role for some of the professions and should be considered to...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occupations'.
Suggestion: many occupations
...ore with masculine traits. Admittedly, many occupation have similar weight for both of genders...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05384615385 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80374854742 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4750886524 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228152041816 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868447139137 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476041405715 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128975272063 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406502109583 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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