The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
In some countries workers have to work during the week with high time working during the week. According to some, the government should set a rule to time working reduce and have longer weekend. I think if workers work beneficial in their shifts and their employer and bosses have satisfying sense about them, they should have a longer weekend.
On the on hand the average of time working in whole of the work is around to eight hours and workers, employes, and so on have to work. But some works such as monitoring experts may have fill your time shift around to eleven hours. These types of works should have longer weekend with enough salary. Not only can this make them to have a good tendency to work better and improve their skills and abilities but it also, makes both have a sense of security about their job and a good sense about their task. They think their duty is important for employers and bosses. For people who work in average time does not necessary increase their weekend time off.
On the other hand, although in some projects and careers you have to stay about twenty or more days in a month consecutive the remain days in that month is your time off and you can go home. In some cases, you con not have shorter working during the week because the project does not complete such as uranium enrichment. In this you have to work more than other types and in most of the times should stay back at work for a week. In such careers you should have longer weekend and time off.
As a result, I think careers which are not necessary and essential the employer can give their employees more time off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...working reduce and have longer weekend. I think if workers work beneficial in the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es should stay back at work for a week. In such careers you should have longer wee...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...er weekend and time off. As a result, I think careers which are not necessary a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46959459459 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07382631138 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8993244797 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354097158739 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164203535081 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115448170923 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227200801224 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148427400476 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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