The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The idea of one united government has existed for quite a long time. Many people argued whether the existence of one government brings more benefit than seperate national government. To my way of thinking, even though the concept of cosmocracy gains a certain amount of advantages, but nothing can compare to the potential amount of drawbacks that it will cause.
Advocates may see that the unity of every nation will help solve numerous crucial problems, such as : imigration, poverty, starvation, disease. Because every country is in the hands of one government, immigrants can easily move to another land to pursue a better life quality, as well as a new hope to find job positions. Taxes will also reduce due to the removal of law that charges goods, by that increase the amount of exportation and bring economical benefit to every single country. As a single universal government, the budgets to solve hunger or environmental problems also rise, and the unity of non profit organizations will definitely make a huge impact on changing the world. As ideal as the new world may sound, the drawback of this unity will drown all of its good signs.
First of all, the concept of cosmocracy means that every political institution will be in the hands of one organization. If the USA plays a leading role meaning capitalism will be the main political institution, it will lead to numerous conflicts between socialism and individualism. An unity of all also means we have to unify all kinds of core values. That is impossible because each country has its own values, we can not find the common sense for those belief systems. Untifing all governments will put massive pressure on the leader, since they have to face too many problems, they can not care about the details. Sometimes the little details are what destroy the whole picture. That is why, it is better to have a separate nation government, because each leader will know what is best for a country.
Secondly, the problem of immigrants will not be solved, but it will turn into a more complicated issue. As more people compete for a job position, the number of unemployment will tremendously increase, which will be the base for the rise of criminals and the government will have to spend more on social assistance. To extend, students will have to be competitive in study at school in order to be hired by companies and receive a high income. This will be the reason why the rate of suicide and depression increase. The pressure of being successful that the young generation have to face may turn them into cold-hearted animals that will do whatever it takes to reach the top. It will also be the reason why cheating school bullying, as well as cyber bullying will increase, turn the whole society into chaos.
To conclude, I strongly believe that united of all governments will cause massive unsolvable problems while the dependent lead of each nation will bring steady development and decrease the amount of social chaos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 7.85571142285 369% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 508.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88385826772 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69491708827 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4477825307 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.772727273 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158062600329 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537814003682 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575700049778 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104917548507 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044439417895 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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