The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, the concept of a single global regime take control the world has been disputed and debated. Despite the valid arguments on both sides, I perceive that having one global government would not be a workable solution.
Mostly, different countries have diverse cultures, values, and beliefs, forming a cohesive global state that satisfies everyone would be challenging. Moreover, establishing a worldwide government would integrate power in one authority, thereby leading to corruption and oppression.
Furthermore, the massive of world's population would make it difficult to enforce laws and uniform regulations. Countries have different levels of development, and so on, a single worldwide political authority would not be able to cater to all humanity.
For that reason, it creates discontent and resistance, this would therefore lead to the collapse of the cosmocracy. Instead, countries should motivate and work together to resolve global issues.
In conclusion, the idea of one-worldism is not a practical solution. Cooperation and collaboration between nations would be a more feasible approach to handle global issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk together to resolve global issues. In conclusion, the idea of one-worldism ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73099415205 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06110048378 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1099564496 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167122090887 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643681963295 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312600716107 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900340978804 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315626551679 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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