The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's globalized world, the concept of having a single global regime take control the world has been disputed and debated. While there are valid arguments on both sides, I perceive that having one global government would not be a workable solution.

Firstly, different countries have different cultures, values, and beliefs, which would make it challenging to form a cohesive global government that satisfies everyone's needs. Additionally, having a single government would mean concentrating power in one entity, which could lead to corruption and abuse of power.
Moreover, the diversity of the world's population would make it difficult to enforce laws and regulations uniformly. Countries have different levels of development, and a uniform government would not be able to cater to everyone's needs.
This would, therefore, lead to discontent and resistance, which would ultimately lead to the collapse of the government. Instead, countries should work towards collaboration and cooperation to address global issues such as climate change, terrorism, and economic inequality.

In conclusion, while the idea of a single global government may seem appealing, it is not a practical solution. Cooperation and collaboration between nations would be a more feasible approach to address global issues.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: forming
...eliefs, which would make it challenging to form a cohesive global government that satis...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...power. Moreover, the diversity of the worlds population would make it difficult to e...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70769230769 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06057193866 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.1405064484 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181877003353 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078409577394 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447900807656 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106431635407 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430699427732 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: forming
...eliefs, which would make it challenging to form a cohesive global government that satis...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...power. Moreover, the diversity of the worlds population would make it difficult to e...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70769230769 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06057193866 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.1405064484 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181877003353 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078409577394 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447900807656 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106431635407 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430699427732 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.