write about the following topic Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree

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write about the following topic:
Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports
Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government should allocate more funding to education than recreational activities and sports. This essay agreed that higher funding should be invested by the government education instead of recreation and sports. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that government already pay more funding. Secondly, discuss how more funding could raise the quality of education.

More supply on educational activities has proven to be successful at bringing the benefit soon. This money can be pumped into facilities for learning to raise the study quality. This means that countries, with a higher education foundation, will attract international students than those where do not. One good illustration of this is in the united kingdom, they invested most of the funding to raise the education system. This is the reason why they have the highest number of international students.

On the other hand, some people hold the idea that authorities should allocate funding to recreational activities and sports. They are equally important for public entertainment. This does not merely provide public fun but also create employments but funding in this field seems to be meagre compared to people's education, this is certainly outsight.

In conclusion, authorities should allocate on recreation and sports. Conversely, it is beneficial for all members of society to have a high-quality education system.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...is field seems to be meagre compared to peoples education, this is certainly outsight. ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54377880184 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92309781548 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562211981567 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.608672199 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193469333361 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779167766859 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782250858074 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121265319789 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780140497312 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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