Write about the following topic:
Life now is better than it was 700 years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
Today life is different from another year behind. There are a lot of improvements that scientists and inventors made for our sustainability nowadays. I agree that this century living improved than 700 years ago.
Meanwhile, several hundred years before, people needed to hardly go to another country to got the information and used several ways like a horse or walk to got there. Now, all the mobility simplified, scientists already invented transportation that we can use. Planes, cars, motorcycle and many more are the transportation that can we uses every day without any difficulties. For instance, this year I went to Bali from Jakarta using a plane, therefore it was convenient and it saved a lot of time.
Along with changing times, technologies invented. By using this technology like the internet we can easily get connected with other people in everywhere and anywhere. Not only communicate with other people in several areas, but society can also get the information provided in the social media and search engine. Former difficulties like needed to the used animal sender to send the message would not happen today. Like when I wanted to go to Bali, I found some great places to visit.
To sum up, the changes in several things from 700 years ago can make our daily life painless. Thankfully to all the inventors who already did a hard-working job and created as many as interesting thinks. I recognize current living is better than a long time ago.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...more are the transportation that can we uses every day without any difficulties. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9674796748 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80086020704 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4035260946 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148919793861 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549378034774 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585552340786 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10050955325 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478411526795 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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