You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Most people do not care enough about environment issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In contemporary society, there has been a growing debate concerning environmental protection. Many people adopt a view that most individuals are not concerned about problems related to environment. From my standpoint, I partly agree with this idea and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay.
Obviously, environment is a complicated that leads to key reasons why most people are not interested in. One significant reason is that people believe environmental problems will not affect society for another 50 years. Therefore, at the present they never think of the consequence of not protecting environment. Another reason would be lack of understanding about environmental issues. In fact, recent studies show that just the minority of citizens fully have an in-dept knowledge of global warming or pollutions. As a result, environmental protection tends to be ignored.
However, a counter argument may be that young generations have much better understanding of these problems thanks to the internet which brings information and evidences as well. There is little doubt that the youth who are taught and prepared on pollution at school has raised their better awareness than the previous generations. To put it simply, it is easy to see many recycling activities or environment-related protection campaigns have been carried out and organized by the youngsters. Therefore, it is not true to confirm that most people do not take into consideration enough about environment.
In conclusion, the fact that whether environmental protection is concerned or not has sparked a controversy and captured a public attention. Personally, while I agree with the idea that not everyone considers environment, I am favor of environmental protection around the globe because I am a part of the youth, the future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...a and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay. Obviously, environment i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4701754386 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31491866408 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4177002142 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130418207795 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457634404654 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549909052584 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079166421636 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368170946072 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.