You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At the moment, people in many countries in the world tend to gain the weight while their rate of health and fitness decrease. In my opinion, this is mainly because of daily activities and eating habits. This essay will discuss this problems in more detail.
On the one hand, today, people are becoming busier so they do not have enough time to cook, that is why fast food like burgers or pizzas is the most choice for them. However, that food is harmful for their health, especially, consumption of this kind of food regularly will boost people’s weight and shorten their lifespan time. Furthermore, more and more citizens overuse modern devices so they are getting used to living sedentary lifestyle. They do not spend anytime on jogging, running or playing sports. As a result, they increase weight. If this phenomenon continues, the citisens will have poor health, especially prone to obesity.
To solve this problem, each individual should be responsible for his or her own health. For example, they can play some sports such as badminton, basketball, swimming or volleyball to relax and improve their health. They should reduce using fast food for breakfast, lunch and dinner. For instance, they can eat fruits, vegetables, brown rice or noodles which they can find anywhere easily instead of chips or sandwichs. Besides, the state government also play an important role in providing public health and educating everyone in country about food dieting and how to exercise correctly. Morever, they should also provide public gyms or fitness centers, and they should support some healthcare polices for populations.
In short, there are many reasons make people increase weight like overeating fast food or a sedentary lifestyle but taking steps such as playing sports and awareness through the campaign is very important for their lives. If they make that to improve their weight now, i think in the future, the percentage of people who take care of themselves may be expanded.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve 84
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children s activities The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in wh 73
- You should spend 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Most people do not care enough about environment issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fro 56
- You should spend 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Most people do not care enough about environment issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fro 61
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 270, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... make that to improve their weight now, i think in the future, the percentage of ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in short, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50779956883 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5544488511 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201734656155 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726341783664 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463515577829 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130557190307 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187970452604 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.