You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Increasing average weight is happening in some nations. Nevertheless, the health and physical abilities of the population are decreased. There are several causes and how we can solve the problem. The following article will give some causes and solutions to this issue.
To begin with, one of the major factors which result in rise human weight and decreasing health may be unhealthy food. Because of the busyness of work, people use fast foods that are high in fat and sugar. Thus, the more excess fat in the body accumulates, the more it affects the health of each person. For example, in the Today News, it is estimated that millions of people in US tuck into fast food instead of health one. Moreover, current lifestyle greatly affects health status. Since most people rarely spend their time doing exercise instead of using their smartphones in their free time. As a consequence, human beings will be prone to live in sedentary way. This will lead to not only the weight gain but also the reduction of their life expectancy.
To matter issues, some people should eat healthy as well as do exercise regularly. By following two activities, human life quality will be improved day by day. Furthermore, they will not only have a balanced diet to keep fit but also have good health. That of making people healthier.
In conclusion, there are some reasons that have influences on weight and health status. Thus, people have the right diet combined with the right exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ifestyle greatly affects health status. Since most people rarely spend their time doi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48024514917 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2266662223 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5555555556 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238189758425 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070338191582 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417534136711 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137032939818 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457538904744 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.