You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
There are considerable number of people study in college or university. On the other side, there are some opinions saying that people should go to vocational training due to insufficient number of qualified workers. However, i do not concur with such perspective because studying in university or college may aid in a broader chance for various occupations as well as eligibility for master's degrees To make it up for their practical skills, they can do other things to be qualified as well as people in vocational training.
In my opinion, academic study should be accomplished in university or college, if possible, rather than in vocational training. There are some benefits for that, primarily for the broader option and chance for occupation. For example, many company require at least bachelor degree. This means choosing vocational training may limit one's option for applying a job. In addition, to continue further study or in other words, to get a master degree, an enormous number of universities only accept bachelor degree.
Even though, it is true that vocational training produce many qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers, it does not mean university or college can not do so. Studying in university or college does not limit the student's capability to learn skills. They can do so by applying additional courses or internships.
In conclusion, I believe that people should go to university or college rather than vocational training because the benefits of it can outweight the drawbacks, such as higher likelihood of getting a job and eligibility to get master's degree. For the drawback, they can make it up by applying internships or additional courses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: many companies
...and chance for occupation. For example, many company require at least bachelor degree. This ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... choosing vocational training may limit ones option for applying a job. In addition,...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...niversity or college does not limit the students capability to learn skills. They can do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22794117647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95356764798 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496323529412 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6621759063 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327980797874 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115297483872 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699022312206 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204876348541 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543445077852 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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