You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The phenomenon of children using smartphones all day has been growing up. This case becomes common and I consider this a positive development.
One reason is during the COVID-19 pandemic when lockdowns were implemented in many regions of the world. Therefore, students do not participate in outdoor activities and technology makes it easier for their activities such as playing games or studying. And they can save money on travel and online activities are always available. However, the benefits of technology make them get into the habit of using their phone every day.
I consider this trend a negative for a number of reasons. The first reason for my belief is using the phone all day with regard to diseases such as being overweight. When using the phone full time, we focus on the phone because the games and work are on the phone. This makes them likely to go out to take part in the activity outdoors. Nutritionists of ABS University Vietnam did some research about the number of children overweight. As a result, 50% of children are overweight due to inactivity because of spending time on phones. Secondly, after a long time using the phone, the skills such as time-management, basic skill, and problem-solving may be limited. This creates disadvantages when in a real environment. For example, according to a recent survey conducted by the National University of Vietnam, 65% of children have difficulty in communicating with others.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of using phones in children and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems by letting children participate in more outdoor activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...being overweight. When using the phone full time, we focus on the phone because the game...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98928126297 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8134561074 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199896624831 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696589760653 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594779657337 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123531382587 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707505025334 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.