1-Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the
responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree?
Share relevant personal experiences.
With women demonstrating their ability to perform just as well as men on the global
professional stage, it is no wonder that more and more men are taking on the
responsibilities of domestic life. It is argued that all household chores should be
distributed evenly between dual income couples. The virtues of this arrangement
will be shown by looking at the positive effects it has on both children and the
relationship quality the married couple experiences.
For one, parents who share housework provide a good example to their children of
the importance of empathy. For instance, while working in Dubai, I taught English to
children of several dual income families. These children were very proactive when it
came to helping their parents with household duties. Looking back, I feel these
children acted in this selfless manner in response to the living models their parents
provided. As this example shows, parents who equally shoulder the burden of
household duties pass on worthy character traits to their children.
In addition to this, the relationship quality married couples experience can benefit
from their sharing in the challenges of day-to-day life. For example, although my
own mother never worked, she was always very gracious of my father when he
would take the time to help her with duties around the house. This sharing in
hardship helped to strengthen my parents’ union and acts as yet another benefit to
the equal divvying of household duties between married couples.
After looking at how equal burden can benefit a married couple’s children and
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73222851018 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3493477859 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098768730614 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375489996382 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285740268849 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0306070945218 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034693694869 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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