With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children.
Do you agree or disagree?
In 21st century technology has been revolutionised the humankind completley, one such thing in today's modern world is the invention of internet and social media webisites. There is lot many of us rely on this technology for information but many children in todays genration are also exposed to many unwanted distarctions at their age. I agree that adults need to be more responsible towards granting permissions of the internet to their children.
Firstly, in todays modern world internet has become the integral part of our lives so did in our childrens lives, It not only helps them get information about many things but also gives them pleasure in there free time. Lot many school kids I know are using internet to play games and browse social media for hours and loosing lot of quality time to spend with their family thus i would suggest parents need to control the permissions of the devices which their children use for this purposes so they are less distracted and more productive. For example, if i give a kid a phone to browse the internet i should set the time limit which is also called as 'screen time' so they dont spend hours on it.
Secondly, social media webistes have turned into addicition for lot of teenagers, according to a recent survey 37 percent of the US youth spend 18 hours of their day on facebook and instagram which not only hurt there daily productivity but also need to face consequences when it comes to there well being
the survey also projects that this kids might loose apetite for food and sleep. On the other hand they fall a prey to many internet scams and fake news articles which indulge and influnce them in a very neagtive way.
In conclusion, I would say internet and social websites are best thing happend to us but getting addicted to it has lot of bigger consequences which you may regret later part of your life. Parents need to educate their children on striking a balance on the usage of these before they turn into vicitms and regret later.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7094017094 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47973581233 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3483846911 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.3 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289920490453 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120548045462 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564283717166 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149784830711 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818106356744 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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