advantage of school abroad
The advantages of studying abroad
Firstly, student who study aboard usually have better qualifications. Since developed country have a larger government funding for education, they have better education system and more prestigious universities with many distinguished scholars, which help graduated students have better jobs with higher salaries. If they study in their home countries in which have a poor quality education, they can find jobs difficultly. Secondly, students become more mature. If they study in foreign countries they have to live far away their parents and deal with daily problems by themselves. In fact, they don’t have ready meals which their mom preserved. Therefore, they have to go shopping for food and cook their own meal. If student attend class in their home countries, they can be less independent and lack initiative. For instance, living with family,they can be taken under their parents ‘s wing they don’t have worry about problems such as cooking, renting house and other housing fees that their parent pay. Finally, students have better at a foreign language. By interacting with foreigners regularly, they would be more confident, and make friends easily, which is a golden chance to have a wide network of contacts. For example, when they go shopping , they need to speak to the assistant and when they go to school, they can talk and discuss with their friends.
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- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- advantage of school abroad 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30222222222 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7016852698 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7855684293 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.045348173689 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208982201425 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553068406737 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257467007395 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24563560502 0.056905535591 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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