Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Throughout the last decade, the level of computer technologies has significantly increased. Furthermore, due to these innovations and developments many people have started to use electronic devices with permanent access to the internet. Nevertheless, a significant amount of people are convinced that internet will never become a preeminent source of information and that newspapers will continue to be more prevalent. Personally, I completely disagree with this notion and I assume that newspapers have already ceased to be a prime source of news.
First thing which should be noted is that many individuals regularly use their electronic devices such as smartphones and laptops. In other words, people do not need to read newspapers anymore due to the fact that all essential information can be obtained from the internet. It can be illustrated by the latest research conducted by the famous German sociologist which elucidated the fact that there has been a sharp decline in the number of people who want to read newspapers.
Similarly, it is well-known that a significant amount of wood should be processed in order to create a few pages of clean paper. That is to say, that due to the dramatically high rate of environmental pollution caused by companies producing paper, many people argue that a significant reduction of environmental hazards can be achieved by avoiding the use of newspapers and other paper-based resources. Thus, considering the fact that many humans have been working on replacing paper based sources of information with their electronic equivalents, it can be concluded that the use of newspapers will continue to decrease.
Taking all these points into consideration, I would like to say that I strongly believe that internet is the only one principal source of obtaining news and that a perceptibly less amount of people will continue to read newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, well, such as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1342888614 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6307894678 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207282670402 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816232563936 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754332993259 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136607396731 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673787483761 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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