Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?
Using mobile phone to answer work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week an increasingly popular trend among young people. Although there are some drawbacks, in my opinion, I believe that this is an overall positive trend.
On the other hand, nobody can deny considerable benefits from this phenomenon. The first reason is that, this kind of device could make it convenient for people to keep in touch with their family, friends, colleagues at anywhere or anytime because it provides users with useful communications such as SMS, call and apps that allow people to instantly connect to everyone and it is also portable. For example, exchange students could make an international call to their family to ease their homesickness. The second reason is that it give people flexibility and comfort to boost their working performance, especially in case some problems arise when they are not the workplace, they can completely handle remotely by using telephones to discuss with their co-workers for solving problem.
On the other hand, there are still potential drawbacks when human increase their dependence on cell phones. Firstly, the habit of overusing these modern device of people could have an negative effect on people’s heath, especially children. Because they tend to spend a lot of time playing mobile games or using social working sites such as Facebook Twitter on their smartphone. As a result, they may suffer medical conditions such as obesity or bad eyesight. Moreover, using a cell phone may pose to people’s life in some situations. For example, using phone while diving car could distract drivers which is the primary cause of traffic accident .
In conclusion, although this trend may bring some notable drawbacks, the benefits of these technical devices are still undeniable. Therefore, I certainly hold the view that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26973684211 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8028012248 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5887775089 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215800494263 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707272514836 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923583511235 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138278176816 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110915114185 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.