Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
In the past, the artwork was perceived as an outlet for creative folk. Even in these modern times, art is considered an integral aspect of life all over the globe. However, only a small percentage of the population enjoys it and lean more towards management gadgets and sciences.
Life has become more fast-paced that even before in human history. All the attention is focused on technological innovations and breakthroughs leaving only the truly artistic to focus on their interests. Furthermore, even the most creative of people are faced with the dilemma to either pick the sciences or humanities. The major reason for this problem is due to the belief that the arts are incredibly less lucrative than the sciences.
As an attempt to promote and re-glorify the arts, media could start focusing on the different international artist, their lives and works. Additionally, governments could also assist and subsidize necessary daily items as majorities of aspiring artist live below or close to the poverty line. Moreover, nations could create and maintain establishments for budding creative artists and make it a cultural hub for the generations to come. For instance, the United Nations has taken some primary steps in preserving places of cultural importance all around the world as an attempt to safeguard the arts, culture and traditions of specific regions.
In conclusion, the arts are important as it has a long-term effect on the culture and originality of the region. It is rather unfortunate that the interest in arts has reduced dramatically in the recent past. However, governments, large associations and organizations can join hands to assist the art community to increase its appreciation in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27173913043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95958166106 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1051627112 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228759526956 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697134301286 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419468695415 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130097473579 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189934607115 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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