The best way to reduce traffic congestion in cities is to provide a free public transport service. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. (India – Academic – March 2018)
Population of the world is increasing by leaps and bounds and undoubtedly taking a toll on the amount of traffic condition in city. As traffic congestion is increasing rapidly, many people think that government should allow free of cost commute. In my opinion, making public transport free would not help to reduce number of vehicle on the roads.
To embark on, people living in the cities are comparatively well off and capable of using their own vehicle in daily commute hence, removing fare will not be of much help. many people find public transport more time consuming as they have to travel some distance in order to reach to the nearest subway station or bus stop. As cities are getting overpopulated, taking a bus or train will not be a comfortable ride thus majority would refrain to use it. Furthermore, public transport nowadays, are not considered to be safe. many complaints have been registered for pick pockting and scuffles.
Instead of making it free, government can plan on improving its efficiency, safety and reach among various parts of the city. various organizations can run campaigns to promote use of public transport and showcase its benefits to the people. Alternatively, government should give more parking space so that people can cover some part of their travel by bus or train. For instance, I usually travel by metro however since the station is bit far from my home, I use my car to reach the station and board the train to reach the destination. This way, I can save some time and leverage public facilities.
To end with, there is no doubt that use of public transport helps in decreasing traffic in cities however, merely by making it free and not considering other factors will definitely not encourage people to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, so, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68964062036 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.155813932 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138020747182 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517598104234 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389646946439 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933308368634 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317909228546 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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