Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Each and everyone has own dream and desire to lead their life, some focus only on money that depends on a person. I completely disagree to drive for the above and I think job satisfaction is of vital importance.
I agreed that job satisfaction brings a plethora of happiness to an individual or the whole. This is because when one who has a strong desire in his work could contribute as maximum as salaried-person. In addition, a person who works on his own pace thinks usually much better than others. For instance, our predecessors encouraged young people to focus on their dreams and escorted them to do satisfying jobs. Therefore, doing the happiest thing is constantly essential than a person looks only at a salary.
Next, a person who fulfills the needs of pursuing only interesting activities can have a better career growth. In other words, the people who want to become famous in a certain field are possible only for whom can put all efforts to attain the goal, which is not possible for one chase for salary, because it required myriad patients and fascinated min. For example, in India, Dr.Ambedkhar to Dr.APJ.Abdul Kalam has excelled in their profession respectively in law and research due to dreamed since childhood and demonstrated their roles magnificently.
In conclusion, I believe that carrying out satisfying jobs is all-important than regular earnings. This also brings augmented happiness and shows the renowned person to the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'thinks'.
Suggestion: usually thinks
...ion, a person who works on his own pace thinks usually much better than others. For instance,...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ambedkhar
...scinated min. For example, in India, Dr.Ambedkhar to Dr.APJ.Abdul Kalam has excelled in t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Abdul
...ample, in India, Dr.Ambedkhar to Dr.APJ.Abdul Kalam has excelled in their profession ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05785123967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94858382528 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.793577432 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129938230795 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517466016451 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518311418852 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825031108131 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580844544415 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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