Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.do you agree or disagree
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage even if it does not appeal to you at all. This essay disagrees with this statement because it gives us pleasure and inspire person to work hard.
First of all,job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high conscience ,this person would not enjoy his life .While persuing ones's interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction. For example, numerous famous researchers made their career choice not because of appealing wages,but because they were passionate about science. Therefore, it is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look at high salary.
Secondly doing what you like keep you motivated and leads to a career growth. In other words ,there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity as people who love their job can easily exceed in their fields of work and achieve better results than those who put salary on first place.For instance Henry Miller decided to leave his regular job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer and after endoring years of ups and downs, he became one of the most famous and well paid author of twentieth century. Thus, advantage of jobs that keeps you satisfied outweigh the drawbacks of a low salary in a long term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5976502894 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.503671432 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.8 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279632258901 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107208876504 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721937931271 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169510479274 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511627447298 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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