The appearance of the internet have changed many things on people's life, one of the most important changes is the way to buy things. Thanks to the development of the e-commerce sites, today there are an increasing trend of people buying things on the internet. The main strongs of this method is the possibiliy to buy something quicky, from home and finding lower prices. However, there are some disadvantages too, as the selection of some stuff without seem them and the problems with the delivery. Althought the drawbacks, in my opinion, buying on the internet is a great tool on people's life.
On the one hand, internet allow people to buy anything from home. This method permits to, with just a few clicks, access to a lot of options of different products. In other words, internet is not just the quickiest way to buy something, is also the best way to save. Let take as an example an E-commerce site, the user could navigate on the page throught of a lot of offerents looking for the best price of the product that he/she wants.
On the other hand, about the disadvantages. The raising of this method have brought with it a lot of challenges to some products that are better to buy in person and also the moment of delivey. About the first one, things as clothes or decoration are difficult to buy on internet, because the photos on the sites are no often the best. About the second disadvantage, buying products on internet allways have a non-virual moment, an this is the delivery. This moment could have many problems as steals or brokens, being a bad experience for the users.
To conclude, for all the aforamentioned arguments, althought that some things are better to buy in person, internet is an amazing aliade to the people when it come to buying things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...ce sites, today there are an increasing trend of people buying things on the internet...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to buy something quicky, from home and finding lower prices. However, there are...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ernet allways have a non-virual moment, an this is the delivery. This moment could...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and this'?
Suggestion: and this
...ernet allways have a non-virual moment, an this is the delivery. This moment could have...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'an' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: an; this
...ernet allways have a non-virual moment, an this is the delivery. This moment could have...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...an amazing aliade to the people when it come to buying things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, so, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60156724309 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483974358974 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3041388823 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181333663011 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687375967609 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412871530829 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120301213687 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237258965493 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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