Cheap overseas travel does more damage than good
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, one of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is the affordable travelling options in terms of flight tickets, accommodations and other resources which are available for us. There is widespread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns to the people who avail such cheap options. However, I am inclined to believe that this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
To begin with, there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one is that, inexpensive travel has given a boom to tourism industry and created a lot of jobs and opportunities. Few decades ago, travelling overseas was not possible for a common man and most of the people could only dreamed of visiting exotic places but with the evolution of tourism industry, low priced travel made it quite easy for anyone to purse his/her dreams and to explore the immense beauty of the world. Therefore, needless to say, all these merits have a far reaching positive impact on our world.
Secondly, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that, budget travel opened new doors for students, philosophers, writers, artists who wanted to travel, experience and exchange different cultures by travelling. Furthermore, businessmen also took benefit of reasonable travel options and used it effectively in order to communicate and to crack deals with their international customers. Hence, it is apparent that why many are in favor of the economical travel.
To recapitulate, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that the benefits of cheap travel are indeed too great to ignore but both states and folks have to be responsible while travelling abroad.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18681318681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9289419435 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.058556501 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.6 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14482678872 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504023999526 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277172612388 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825506283571 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176156496913 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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