Climate change: effects and measures
It is undeniable that the earth is being destroyed by climate change. This alarming phenomenon causes a lot of bad effects for many countries over the world, but there are several measures could be taken to tackle the problem.
There are two main drawbacks of climate change that bring a disaster for biodiversity. Firstly, wildlife habitats are being destroyed because of a sudden increase in temperature. Many species of animals and plants, therefore, are on edge of extinction. They are hardly able to live in a devastated environment. Secondly, sea level will raise up because of ice melting and the expand of oceans caused by higher temperature. Millions of people would be displaced by flooding. They would lose their homes and jobs, perhaps would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or other countries.
Because of these above problems, solution should be taken to slow down the speed of climate change. Governments play an important role in this case because they could introduce laws of carbon dioxide emission reduction. They also could impose a new tax on heavy industries that create too much poison gas and other polluters. In addition, governments should encourage people to make an use of alternative energies, such as solar, wind or water power. Furthermore, as individual, we should give preference to public transport. Getting rid of using plastic bags habit and keeping your goods as long as possible are also effective measures.
In conclusion, climate change is a global threat. People must cope with its problems by anyways they can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18039215686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73291413783 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.24363711 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7058823529 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183739039192 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505845329635 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077397138241 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120884529203 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974100781007 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.