Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
It is true that the frequency of juvenile delinquency is rising in urban areas around the world. A driver behind this could be the intensive exposure to violence among young people, and governments could take several measures to address this issue.
In recent years, movies and video games for children and teenagers often contain violent content. This leads to real-life violent behavior of small children and adolescent, which then results in real crimes with irretrievable consequences. FreeFire or PUBG, for instance, are video games that have free access to users of any age group and provide features such as shooting guns, fighting, or booming. Being exposed to those actions in a long term could cause children to have twisted mind and behave violently.
Government bodies could take steps to tackle this problem. The first one could be enforcing laws that ban violent games or content from exposing to today’s youngsters. This would protect small children from toxic behaviors, which have an adverse bearing on their journey of forming their personality. For the second one, they could allocate resources to build recreational facilities that facilitate the children’ outdoor activities and interactions with fellow peers. If children spend more time for those healthy activities, they will grow up become good citizens.
In conclusion, while exposing to violence for a long time could cause young people to commit to crimes, the governments could solve this problems by implementing laws to restrict violent content and motivate children to participate in healthy activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4314516129 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70563915196 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1008056066 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132139721186 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474741486897 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582667677318 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981746814789 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647364402598 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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