Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved? Write at least 250 words.
It is imperative for adults to complete their education as it is essential for future job opportunities. Now a days, plethora of youngsters are dropping out from schools and the rate of unemployment is rising, simultaneously affecting the society differently. In the following paragraphs I will discuss how can this situations can be improved.
The number of private learning institutes in any city is far greater than any government aided schools. The primarily reason for most of children to drop out from private schools is expensive education and the same is not affordable by many people, causing adverse effects on society as adults will deprived from basic education. If government restrict private schools to charge unnecessary high fees from public then citizens will favor this initiative and let their children to complete their study. Secondly, most of the state run schools are in bad shape and lacking with required facilities and less staff to teach. Because of this parents avoid their children to give admissions to these schools. Government can provide fund to these schools so that state run institutes can have the modern facilities and able to attract large number of adults.
Unemployment is rising significantly because mostly companies looking for people, who are well qualified and skilled. As many children did not complete their education they failed to land a job and contribute to unemployment. Society as a whole affects most because if in any country young people are less qualified then country will suffer from less foreign investments. Additionally, multi national companies will avoid establishing their organisation in that country, leading to less infrastructure development and less revenue to government in the way of taxes.
In conclusion, government can focus on enhancing their state run school's existence by improving infrastructure to compete with private ones. Also motivate youngsters to complete their education to lower down the unemployment level so that society will not suffer from these situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'deprive'
Suggestion: deprive
...verse effects on society as adults will deprived from basic education. If government res...
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...red facilities and less staff to teach. Because of this parents avoid their children to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99729044305 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7244395986 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217413021079 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753699703165 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683887135812 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148119973778 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631928940994 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.