Employers sometims ask people applying for jobs for personal information ,such as their hobbies and interests ,and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays , There is a common sense that provide the interviewee’s private information such as the interests and hobbies or marriage status in an interview is a compulsory procedure for evaluate the whether employee is compatible for the job. From my prospective, I agree to provide such information to help the employers to get to know more about their preferred staff’s character picture in mind.
Some people hold argument against provide the personal information to the employers ,because they think the personal information should keep in confidential. For some employee, they do not want disclosure their hobbies such as play video games which will make the employer’s misunderstanding it would affect their further work. Marriage status is another sensitive issue that should keep as secret for the staff is work alone and there is nothing relate to their spouse or family. Disclosure such personal information contribute nothing to the employer’s judgment in interview.
Others who support provide personal information in applying for jobs think the benefit is obvious. Some hobbies and interest such as play football or do yoga will help the employer to organize some hobby club or event in company. The staff will surely enjoy such activity after work and will increase their productivity in work. The marriage status is sometimes used for the employers roll out the family days,and give the family member a chance get to know the company. Further more , Some company will hold a children’s day party if their staff have kids.
In conclusion, The advantage of providing the employer’s personal information in applying for job .but the company should keep the employer’s personal as confidential to make the employee feel free to note it in their curriculum vita.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12497444852 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4534989426 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346949766499 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14021566106 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683426195454 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227415337761 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322670706059 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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