Essay: Usually directors are paid much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some people agree with this but others believe it is unfair. Discuss both the views and give your opinion on this topic.
It is argued that annual wages of top-level management are more as compared to shop floor staff-members. Owing to this, few people concur with the notion whereas others disgruntled with the same. while major responsibilities and stressful job could be the reason why higher salaries are paid to directors, I accord with credence that ordinary workers should also be rewarded by big remuneration.
On the one hand, board of directors are paid sky-rocketing packages because they are the fundamental pillars of any organisation. As all the important decisions of any organisation are made by upper administrative employees, they always work under immense stress to decide future strategy of the company. In addition to that, high authority do not get enough time for their kin and kin due to their busy schedule. For example, I work in a firm where our managing director has to work till late night as he has lots of meetings and he is sacrificing his personal life for the betterment of the company. However, I deem that a pivotal role has been played by normal workers.
On the other hand, people who are doing common job cater the organisation according to their caliber. Though their job might be simpler looking, it cannot be neglected. When there is a comparison between upper and lower management is done, both have their own traits which cannot be replaced by one-other. To exemplify, a work of machinist cannot be done by a director or vie-versa. Therefore, there should be some fair structure that all the workers should be paid as per their loyalty and dedication towards the work.
To recapitulate, while pressurize work could be the reason for expensive pay checks of high authority, I think an equal share should be reimbursed to basic staff-members as well. Furthermore, it is recommended that management should not only focus on the type of task, but they should also keep in mind that how much efforts are put by an individual to achieve it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... wages of top-level management are more as compared to shop floor staff-members. O...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ereas others disgruntled with the same. while major responsibilities and stressful jo...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... they should also keep in mind that how much efforts are put by an individual to ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94561933535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89123393535 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595166163142 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3868849499 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115535696868 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401550945801 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487835870033 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071399845704 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592482726895 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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